Sunday, April 10, 2011

The Backside Cure.


Allen felt depressed beyond cure. Now, amidst these million cricket fans cheering their home team on the field, she was drowning- drowning in that roaring noise when CSK won. Yes, she worshiped MS Dhoni. She loved the men in yellow. But, she wondered why when certain men have God’s destiny written vividly even on their backsides, she was only a nobody.
After the post match party, Dhoni took his prize-woman to his room. He rode her backside fast and hard. Her name was Allen.
 Allen’s last thoughts that night: ‘Yes!  Now, I’ve God’s destiny written vividly on my backside too.”
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LOL.. I hope you enjoyed it :) That's my new 100 fiction (story in 100 words)- Taking a stab at writing after a long, long time :) Great to be back- and yes, loving all the cricketing action :)

11 comments:

WarmSunshine said...

good for dhoni :D but for the girl... umm im not sure... what do you think? :)

that was a clever write up! I'll take it up some time.. this fiction in a 100 words thing :)

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Only if Dhoni had been single... :P

But then it can be any Dhoni :P Hehe nice one.
Long time away from blogger, welcome back.

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

bollywoodstylediaries said...

nice one!

--xh-- said...

Good one. you have not lost your touch. :) Welcome back!

☆ Rià ღ said...

good to see u back...good for Dhoni hmm! :D

rantravereflect/ jane said...

2warm sunshin--> :)
100 ficion is fun!

rantravereflect/ jane said...

@ blas--> yehh planning to write more often :p n yehhh, wish he were single ;)

rantravereflect/ jane said...

@ BSD-- :) ZZANKSIEEE

rantravereflect/ jane said...

@ XH--> Yeh feels god to be back!

rantravereflect/ jane said...

@ ria-> thanksss for the love babe

tys said...

good i hate this Dhoni guy...one world cup win and the guy is god..come on...

doesnt help that i have to put a bucket under my wife's mouth everytime the chap come on screen...

btw, interesting post..

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