Wednesday, December 29, 2010

THREE STRIKES..



Dave looks at the girl in the yellow kurta and blue jeggings on the bench. It’s his favorite pastime- checking out chicks and scoring them. He usually gave a girl three chances. Three STRIKES was all a girl got.

‘She’s a 4/10- ordinary face, decent body, smooth skin, brown eyes- nice, but nothing to rave about. Strike 1.’

‘A frown creased her forehead. Not a pretty sight. Strike 2.’

Dave almost loses interest, when the girl smiles.

The smile changes everything. Suddenly the face turns extraordinary, the body bootylicious, the skin sensuous and the eyes sparkling. Cupid STRIKES his heart.

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This 100 fiction was inspired by Ellie Goulding's super smile. All you guys- 'Happy New Year' and remember, let that gorgeous smile set ya face aglow.

23 comments:

Chocolate Lover said...

hehe thish ish nice ^_^

suruchi said...

happy new year to u too jane..
may all things bright n beautiful fill up ur life...
n yes smiles too...
coz like u said it right..they change it all:)

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

I think something struck. I hear music now.

Happy New Year Jane.

Blasphemous Aesthete

Mademoiselle Deva said...

cute! very cute!

bollywoodstylediaries said...

nice!!

Bikramjit said...

Thats why they say LAUGHTER is the best policy...

:)

Happy new year to you and may all your wishes come true in 2011..

and keep smilingggggggggggg

Bikram's

Tys on Ice said...

i like the plainjane blog better...i have not idea whats going on here...i feel like the first time i went on a chat site...never did that again...

hey, great to hear from u again...happy new year

Ria said...

nicely written!! :)

brocasarea said...

happy new yr!:)

Beauty and the BEast said...

awww... that was super sweet! and what a thought to enter the new year with!!

Wish you a fab year ahead!

Keep spreading those smiles :)

A said...

Personality (including smile) makes all the difference. You got it right.

sm said...

beautiful written
happy new year

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Mia said...

babes...it is scientifically proven that when a man is checking out a women to score...the smile does come into the picture...

also i just saw this documentary from discovery yesterday - the science of sex appeal which talks about something similar...check if out if you have the time its interesting
http://www.mytvblog.org/?p=2444

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good to be back here after long....

Heart'n'Soul said...

hahaha
awesome - i totally lurrrved it girl

Happy new year to u too :) XX

- Sugar Cube - said...

hehe a smile can make a lot of diff :) good one

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Mademoiselle Deva said...

smile can change everything!

Bourbon Legend said...

I just did your links cover to cover. You must forgive me if I feel a hundred words are just not enough. For me, the best love stories are told when they span years and continents, across tears, ruined lives and memories that singe....

Or maybe I am getting ahead of myself.

So what happened next Jane? A sequel. By popular demand.

Devil Incarnate... said...

Hmmm cute one.. smile can make many things straight..!

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