Tuesday, October 5, 2010

THE FACEBOOK (R)AGE ( 100-fiction)

100 fiction:
Well- this is my first real attempt @ fiction in exactly 100 words. Hope you enjoy it!

Sudish liked Piya. He liked her brown eyes- they were brown pools of chocolate liqueur he wanted to dive into on a dry day. He liked her tiny waist- it was like a fresh cigarette he longed to squeeze and savor. He liked her poker-straight hair- each strand wafted like the rebelliously thin margin by which India trumped Australia in the first Mohali Test today. He liked her contrasting outfits - they were like fresh, different daily- facebook- updates.  

 But he also liked Riya, Anees, Pareezad....

After all, this is the FB (R)age- get fresh and different updates everyday.

10 comments:

nOt anyone you know said...

and loves this one.
there are one so many like Sudish =P

nOt anyone you know said...

*loved

Scribblers Inc said...

WOHO! Good stuff...flash fiction is actually a LOT of fun!

Scribblers Inc.

P.S.- And the queen returns to me blog after ages!! How have you been! :)

rantravereflect/ jane said...

@not anyone you know-->
hee, soo ya're one like sudish:D

rantravereflect/ jane said...

@ SCRIBBLERS INC-->
yeh, flash fiction is helping me worm outta ma writer's block ;)

n yehhhh, i've been really good, :D
i'm happy to be bloggin again, n i no longer feel like de queen bee :( so outta touch, but yes, will be back :)
thanks for the encouragement!

nOt anyone you know said...

sometimes,when there is no one special in sight =P

Cinderella said...

Haha! Very true!

Compassion Unlimitted said...

WB.
What a dramatic finish on this fast paced lifestyle of today.
Good One
Keep writing
TC
CU

♪♪HARINI♪♪ said...

ROFL!! That is so true!
and I loved the pictures :)

ClassyandFabulous said...

HAHAH i love this one very clever!

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