Well- this is my first real attempt @ fiction in exactly 100 words. Hope you enjoy it!
Sudish liked Piya. He liked her brown eyes- they were brown pools of chocolate liqueur he wanted to dive into on a dry day. He liked her tiny waist- it was like a fresh cigarette he longed to squeeze and savor. He liked her poker-straight hair- each strand wafted like the rebelliously thin margin by which India trumped Australia in the first Mohali Test today. He liked her contrasting outfits - they were like fresh, different daily- facebook- updates. But he also liked Riya, Anees, Pareezad....
After all, this is the FB (R)age- get fresh and different updates everyday.
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and loves this one.
there are one so many like Sudish =P
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WOHO! Good stuff...flash fiction is actually a LOT of fun!
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P.S.- And the queen returns to me blog after ages!! How have you been! :)
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hee, soo ya're one like sudish:D
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yeh, flash fiction is helping me worm outta ma writer's block ;)
n yehhhh, i've been really good, :D
i'm happy to be bloggin again, n i no longer feel like de queen bee :( so outta touch, but yes, will be back :)
thanks for the encouragement!
sometimes,when there is no one special in sight =P
Haha! Very true!
WB.
What a dramatic finish on this fast paced lifestyle of today.
Good One
Keep writing
TC
CU
ROFL!! That is so true!
and I loved the pictures :)
HAHAH i love this one very clever!
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