Thursday, November 4, 2010

Hanky-Panky Hickey


My new 100 fiction (story in 100 words) is a reflection of my current television obsession. Read more and hit the comment section below for your comments.
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Suzie cozied up to David in the basement car park. She flexed her spine and arched her back towards the car hood in the most provocative arch possible.
‘Sue, don’t do this baby.’
‘2 weeks since we started dating. And you haven’t even kissed me.’
‘It’s too dangerous.I CAN’T baby.’
‘WHY? I want a love-bite Dae, nothing too tricky
Just a big bad, rough red, hanky-panky hickey’


The buttons on her corset broke free and David lost all control. He closed his eyes and bit into Suzie’s virgin-white, silky-smooth neck.

That's how Suzie died and turned into a bloodsucking vampire.

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18 comments:

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

I remember Bella and Edward, and then I remember Rennesme...

:-)

tanvii.com said...

Hahaha!!! Made me laugh actually. It would be finny it really happened! ;)

humbl devil said...

nys one...
:)

Ria said...

Aah very well written...i agree with Ansul's comment.

Pavitra .... said...

nice one! :)
Had a touch of Twilight...i liked it!

Mademoiselle Deva said...

hahaha! quite funny to be honest! nice story though!

A said...

Nice one...funny though

Bikramjit said...

Ohhhhhhhhhhh my godddddddd I guess you are a fan of twilight :) he hehe
beautiful story ..

Bikram's

♪♪HARINI♪♪ said...

That was so well written! :)

Amrita said...

:D
i like.


btw i added u on gtalk.. that murderous id is me...

Amrita said...

:D
i like.


btw i added u on gtalk.. that murderous id is me...

bollywoodstylediaries said...

LOL!! so unexpected!!

rantravereflect/ jane said...

@blas--> yeh renesmee n jake- imprinting!

@tanvii--> :) yeh, id love to get bitte by a vampire n live liek forever

@humble devil--> :) thanks
@ ria--> thanks again

rantravereflect/ jane said...

@pavitra--> tyeh a touch of twilight n a spot of vampire diaries, my current television obsession

@Mmselle Deva--> :D

@a--> YEh LOL

rantravereflect/ jane said...

@Bikram--> YEHH, I'M A FAN!
@Harini--> thankss
@amrita--. yeh, added ya ryte bak

rantravereflect/ jane said...

@BSD--> hee, glad i jumped ya bones ;)

nOt anyone you know said...

oh and she joined the pale-cold-red eyed-single expression- species. awww!

nOt anyone you know said...

whoops after i posted the comment i read the comment that you were a fan =P but then, you cant deny the facts can ya?

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