My new 100 fiction (story in 100 words) is a reflection of my current television obsession. Read more and hit the comment section below for your comments.'*****************************************************
Suzie cozied up to David in the basement car park. She flexed her spine and arched her back towards the car hood in the most provocative arch possible.
‘Sue, don’t do this baby.’
‘2 weeks since we started dating. And you haven’t even kissed me.’
‘It’s too dangerous.I CAN’T baby.’
‘WHY? I want a love-bite Dae, nothing too tricky
Just a big bad, rough red, hanky-panky hickey’
The buttons on her corset broke free and David lost all control. He closed his eyes and bit into Suzie’s virgin-white, silky-smooth neck.
That's how Suzie died and turned into a bloodsucking vampire.
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‘2 weeks since we started dating. And you haven’t even kissed me.’
‘It’s too dangerous.I CAN’T baby.’
‘WHY? I want a love-bite Dae, nothing too tricky
Just a big bad, rough red, hanky-panky hickey’
The buttons on her corset broke free and David lost all control. He closed his eyes and bit into Suzie’s virgin-white, silky-smooth neck.
That's how Suzie died and turned into a bloodsucking vampire.
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18 comments:
I remember Bella and Edward, and then I remember Rennesme...
:-)
Hahaha!!! Made me laugh actually. It would be finny it really happened! ;)
nys one...
:)
Aah very well written...i agree with Ansul's comment.
nice one! :)
Had a touch of Twilight...i liked it!
hahaha! quite funny to be honest! nice story though!
Nice one...funny though
Ohhhhhhhhhhh my godddddddd I guess you are a fan of twilight :) he hehe
beautiful story ..
Bikram's
That was so well written! :)
:D
i like.
btw i added u on gtalk.. that murderous id is me...
:D
i like.
btw i added u on gtalk.. that murderous id is me...
LOL!! so unexpected!!
@blas--> yeh renesmee n jake- imprinting!
@tanvii--> :) yeh, id love to get bitte by a vampire n live liek forever
@humble devil--> :) thanks
@ ria--> thanks again
@pavitra--> tyeh a touch of twilight n a spot of vampire diaries, my current television obsession
@Mmselle Deva--> :D
@a--> YEh LOL
@Bikram--> YEHH, I'M A FAN!
@Harini--> thankss
@amrita--. yeh, added ya ryte bak
@BSD--> hee, glad i jumped ya bones ;)
oh and she joined the pale-cold-red eyed-single expression- species. awww!
whoops after i posted the comment i read the comment that you were a fan =P but then, you cant deny the facts can ya?
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