Tuesday, October 26, 2010

MARISOL'S BABY


I worked with a lot of passion and conviction on 'Marisol's Baby'. This 100-word story is inspired by a true story in recent times. Hit the comment icon below, for your comments.
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18/10/2010
The baby bawls a grotesque war-cry, tearing the house into pieces. 20-year-old Marisol had seen mothers hitting their babies to silence them- what should she do?
28000 murders...
15000 pot packages...
Beheaded convicts...
Bullet-blasted bodies...
2 deadly drug cartel lieutenants tearing the country into pieces…
In Marisol’s head, these images transition like PowerPoint slides in her criminology classes.

Her baby needs no violence; but love, hope, principals, values... Today, as she- Marisol Valles Garcia is sworn in as Police Chief, Praxedis G.Guerrero, Mexico, she  swears by her life that she’ll terminate drug-related crime- not with violence, but love, hope, principals, values.

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17 comments:

Tanvi said...

Had no idea about this. Learnt something worthy! :)

P.S. Thanks for your comment on my blog! :) It lead me to yours.

Cinderella said...

I am inspired.

dreamscapes said...

nice story with a noble thing about it

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

I wish her luck!

Its a tough task, but because she is a mother, she can do it.

bollywoodstylediaries said...

I didnt know she had a baby!! wish her all the luck.

Anonymous said...

Why did u name her Marisol? Why not Maryjane or Angeldust?..lol

BIG Omi said...

100 fiction! :) Nice subject.. quite to ponder upon..

Marisol name fits The Chief of Police Description..

Nailed It!! :D

Ria said...

Wow this was good!! Really liked it.

rantravereflect/ jane said...

@ tanvi--> glad ya learned something worthwhile, i did :)

rantravereflect/ jane said...

@ cindy--> mwuahh cindymari ;)

rantravereflect/ jane said...

@dreamscapes--> :)

@blasphemous athlete--> i hope they keep her alive

rantravereflect/ jane said...

@bollywood diaries--> yeah she has one, i cudnt find a pic of teh baby tho..

@ anonymou--> i think i shud've changed teh name, but i wanted to pay a tribute to teh real lady :)

rantravereflect/ jane said...

@big omi--> thanks :) n marisol is the real woman, me din't make up her name ;)

@ria--> thanks a ton :)

Amrita said...

:)

humbl devil said...

first i thought this was fiction..20 something police chief??

nysly written..
:)

Akshay said...

i am visiting ur blog after quite a while.... new interesting look....

Bikramjit said...

All the best to her and hope she succeeds in what she has vowed for .. drugs are the reason for a lot of crime.. fingers crossed ...


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